Strengths -clear make reader easy to understand what is it about and how does it work understand what ; each function do(not need to take a long time to get it); ; -but there are too few of the requirement just 7 ? The description clearly point out the objective of the project. The diagrams are simple and understandable. The functions are summarised clearly and simple. They provide the information clearly.; The information are easy to understand not too much complicate. Weaknesses Grammar is mostly incorrect. Should provide more details on requirements section. Their requirements are clear but they should add more detailed about their requirements. 1. Too broad requirement such as G2,G3,R1; 2. Lack of detailed functional requirement iI think requirement hard to understand The Authentication requirement is not clear to understand. Their feature is not interested.They have only 7 requirements for their system. I think it is not enough for their system. -almost grammar is wrong. spelling wrong vocabulary. does not clear in (evaluation) function, what they do? In requirement part, there are a lot of unspecified requirements. Also the requirement are very few. There are less than 10 requirements, which are not cover over the system ad not in detail.; Example of unspecified requirements :; "G2.Resource reservation System should evaluate all available resource."; They didn't clarify what all available resource are, how many of them. And who have to evaluate those resource, system or user?; Also same problem on G3, the word recommend resource. They didn't clarify well.; ; "A1.The Authentication module must divide the user privilege."; They didn't clarify about the user privilege. What user privilege are? Is it mean public/private or admin/user??. It doesn't contain requirements for all functions. Also, the amount of requirements are too small. A2 and R1 seem confusing. Using diffence fonts and size in many section(some are too small) make it pretty hard to read and feature still less, but maybe they might have no clue what would come out until the project is finished(Same as our).